NOTE: Parts 1 and 3 of The Fire Hostage first appeared on author and fairy-tale maven extraordinaire Madeleine Shade's website in early 2015. Madeleine had invited me to write something for her, and I was more than delighted to accept her invitation, though with a limit of 4000 words my ambition far outstripped my word count, and I had to leave the middle part of the tale untold, at least for that time being. I finally completed Part 2 earlier this year (February, 2018) bringing the total ending word count to 7,463,
In celebration of my 60th birthday on August 9, 2018, I offer the story, complete for the first time, in three installments. I've included a few of Arthur Rackham's classic color illustrations for Wagner's Ring cycle, as The Fire Hostage is closely based on Siegfried, the third opera in the cycle.
You can read Part 2 here and Part 3 here
You can read Part 2 here and Part 3 here
Enjoy! (TAS)
THE FIRE HOSTAGE
Once
upon a time—and a fell and fearsome time it was, when endless twilight lay upon
the land—there lived a lowly orphan waif whom men called Findlekind. A callow and
untutored lad, brusque of speech and coarse of manner, the youngling had been
set to work as a striker’s apprentice when he was scarcely tall enough to hoist
a hammer. And so in the forge he labored for many a year, growing at last into
a strong and comely youth.
Now,
having been raised among hard, rough-spoken men, Findlekind was ignorant of his
origin and lineage. Neither had he known the companionship of a woman, nor
ever, in truth, set eyes upon one save from afar. And yet, for all, the lad
knew naught of fear; undaunted by darkness or danger, brash and impetuous as
the wild beasts he often joyed to stalk beneath the spreading branches of the
trees, even to the far reaches of the great green wood. So it was that when he came
to be of an age, Findlekind took his leave of the brigands who had fostered
him, and boldly struck out on his own with a mind to explore the wider world,
to seek his fortune, and to learn the secret of his birth. “Mayhap I shall come
to know fear as well,” said he.
Some
leagues to the east, upon a barren mountainside, a mysterious light was seen to
shine perpetually in the gloaming, a shimmering roundel of varicolored fire
that danced and flickered, silent and graceful as the lambent curtains so often
wont to ring the northern sky. It was toward this wonder, like a guiding star, that
Findlekind made his solitary way. And so it fell out upon an hour belonging
neither to day nor to night, that the youth found himself deep in the murky heart of the wood, a place
where even the bravest souls were often loath to venture.
And
there, before the narrow mouth of a cavern, the fearless callant came upon a
dwarf, a vile creature of baleful countenance and irksome humor, who, with
peevish curse and impious oath upon his gnarled lips, labored at a battered forge
of ancient elvish make, the dull ring-a-ting-ting of his tiny hammer echoing
among the ageless trees.
“You
there, boy,” cried the dwarf, “come, help build up the fire for me, for, in
truth, I cannot make it hot enough myself. Look lively, now, my son!”
“You
are no sire of mine,” Findlekind replied, and it was surely true, for the youth
stood three times taller than his would-be master, pleasingly formed of body
and limb with flowing locks of golden hair, a handsome human creature born of
beauty and strength. “In any case you are a fool to fear a little heat, even so
small and weak a thing as you are.”
“Nay,
‘tis you’re the fool,” croaked the dwarf, “for, though scant and frail, I know
the secret of a great treasure-hoard that lies hidden but a little way from
here. I’ll share it with you, on my name, Zwergrotz, I swear, if you’ll but
help me put this shattered sword to rights.” He held up the splintered remnants
of the blade so that the youth might examine it.
“I’ve
never seen its like before,” said Findlekind as he turned the pieces this way
and that in his hands. “Such a blade was surely spell-forged, for the edges are
like adamant, and the face of it shines with the gathered light of a thousand
twinkling stars. So marvelous a thing must have been formed in the magic fire
of Loge himself, for only such an unearthly blaze could ever burn hot enough to
melt the metal.”
“Do
I look like I’ve got magic fire?” Zwergrotz grumbled bitterly. “Think you I have
but to whistle for the Trickster to come panting like a hound at my heel? No,
no! ‘Tis not so! Zvergrotz might as well wish for chickens that roast
themselves upon a spit, or sacks of gold that fall like hail from cloudless
noon-bright skies. Alas! The gods are cruel to such as I. Their favors fall on
comelier folk, wherefore poor dwarves are left to toil and fend as best they
might. Come, then, show some pity, and work the bellows for me, boy!”
“If
so I must.” The young man heaved an indolent sigh. “But only if you will tell
me how this goodly weapon came to be sundered, and of the hero who wielded it.
For combat that could shatter a blade like this must surely have been fierce,
and how I’d have thrilled to witness so mighty a battle! Yet I suppose I can
settle for your telling of the tale instead.”
“I
know naught of all that,” said the dwarf. “The thing came to me as you behold
it even now.”
“And
how was that, my little man? Whence came this wonder into your possession?”
“From
the hand of a dying wench—Lorne her name. Great with child was she, weary and
weak, for she had been fleeing a terrible bane: her lover felled upon the field
of battle, and the gods’ own minions pursuing her through the forest, seeking
after her, or so she claimed, to snatch the babe. She bid me take the sword and
foster the child so that he might one day wield it in honor of his sire.”
“What
then?” said Findlekind, pumping the bellows with all his might until the fire
roared hot and high.
“Pffttt!
What then indeed?” The dwarf’s spittle hissed upon the coals. “The wench died
in the whelping of a son, naming the child with her final breath. ‘Garin,’ said
she, e’er I could lift the cursed thing to her breast, ‘My little Garin. son of
Lotharing, my brother, my love...’ And that was that.”
“So
what became of the child?” asked Findlekind.
“What
do you suppose,” Zwergrotz laughed scornfully, “that I’d have aught to do with
a bastard born of incest? Nay! Better to curse myself a thousand times! I kept
the sword as payment for my trouble, and sold the squalling brat to an ogre,
the better to be rid of it.”
“Try
the fire now,” said Findlekind, “for, in truth, I think it burns too hot for
any common metal.”
“Still
no good,” complained the dwarf. “It’s useless! Useless!”
“Patience,
little master,” said Findlekind. “I’ll make it hotter still. Only tell me the
rest of the tale as I work.”
“The
rest? Aye. There’s more to be told. The ogre had not gone far with the brat. He
meant to roast it up with onions and turnips, and make a soup from the bones
that were left after the feast—I recollect his going on about it, drooling, and
smacking his fetid lips all the while. But being quite stupid like the others
of his kind, and short-sighted withal, the hapless fool lost his way in the
dusk before he could reach home. T’was then he stumbled into a camp of
tall-folk, a band of deserters from some war or another, and a desperate lot
they were. They fell upon the gormless fiend and slew him. I heard the
commotion from a distance, the shouts and roars and howls of rage, and all the
while the infant bawling like as to wake
the dead. T’was they, the tall-folk, took the child, but whether to foster it
or feast upon it themselves I was not keen to learn. All I know is that the
cursed squalling ceased, and I was content to have peace and quiet at last.”
“Methinks
the fire can get no hotter now,” said Findlekind. “Give me a turn at the striking
plate, and we’ll see what a pair of strong hands can do.”
“Very
well, boy. Use that!” Zvergrotz nodded towards a heavy mallet that leaned
against the cavern wall. “A clumsy thing it is and poorly balanced, but better suited
to your size, I’ll wager.” Findelkind hefted it easily and began to work the
metal. A spray of orange sparks flew up with the first clanking blow, like an
angry flock of fiery birds rising to their doom. And over, and over, seven and
twenty times again, the anvil rang, until, at last, the broken pieces of the sword
were roughly joined anew.
“You’ve
done it!” cried the dwarf, dancing about for joy. “With this the treasure
surely shall be mine!”
“Perhaps.”
Findlekind examined his work with a frown. “Yet even in so hot a blaze, these
welds are weak at best. No telling how long it will be before the thing breaks
once again. I must needs reheat the metal that it may be forged with greater
care.”
“So
be it,” Zvergrotz muttered impatiently, “only be quick.”
Now,
as he labored, an idle notion came into Findlekind’s head. I wish I’d known my father and my mother. I wonder what they were like, and how they came to know each other e’er
I was gotten... And then a strange and wonderful thought came to him: What if I were the infant in the dwarf’s tale? Could I be the son of
Lotharing, the great warrior, and Lorne, the fair and faithful? At that
very moment an errant spark leapt up from the forge to waken the lad from his
daydream, scorching him painfully upon the chest, quite close to the heart.
“Donner’s
cock!” the youth swore in a loud voice. “Will this cursed metal never soften?
Melt!
Melt! Flow together like a river and be one
Where
there were many and yet none!
May
Loge, the fire-god’s will be done!”
No
sooner had Findlekind uttered the words than his prayer was answered, for there
came a great gust of wind, and a column of brilliant viridescent flame fell from
the sky with a yawning roar. The unearthly green-gold fire danced upon the
crimson coals with a sound now like the tinkling of tiny bells or again the
mischievous laughter of a child. Yet the green fire did not overwhelm the red,
but only made the forge burn hotter until the metal was soft enough again to
work.
Findlekind
wasted no time, but laid the glowing blade upon the anvil and struck home, folding
and refolding the metal three times by three times, and hammering three times
again, until the sword had been turned no fewer than seven and twenty times in
all, a number most pleasing to the gods.
“‘Tis
done!” he cried, lofting the weapon in haughty salute to the glory of youth,
which knows nothing of the impossible. “Now, to try it!” Findlekind twirled the
sword about, tossing the hilt from hand to hand in order to test its balance.
Then, grasping it firmly, he brought it down edge-on against the fulciment
itself. A single blow was all it took to cleave the anvil clean in twain.
“Ha!
At last” The dwarf hopped up and down, grabbing greedily for the hilt. “’Tis
mine at last!”
“Have
a care, little man,” said Findlekind, knocking the dwarf into the dirt, “lest I
be of a mind to sunder your miserable carcass as well, for I know now who I am!”
“It
cannot be!” cried Zwergrotz with a piteous squeak. “Surely, you cannot be—”
“Aye!”
said Garin, for this truly was his name, “I am the son of Lotharing and Lorne! T’was
my mother you found in the forest, and this very sword you stole from her dying
hands. T’was to her you gave your worthless word, turning away before the
warmth had even left her to sell me to the ghoul, and wash your cursed hands of
mother and child, all in a single craven stroke. I should slay you here and now
for what you’ve done!”
“Mercy!”
The hapless creature cowered upon the ground. “Have pity on poor Zvergrotz! I’ll
share my treasure with ye, young hero! Did I not promise to divide it so? Only aid
me in retrieving it, and I shall be as good as my word.”
“What
good was your word to my mother?” Garin towered menacingly above the dwarf. “I
shall have my revenge upon you, feckless worm, of that you may be sure. Yet,
perhaps I owe you some little grace for telling me of my beginnings. And if
there’s treasure to be had, well, you’ll lead me to it and soon, for a wealthy
man can slay a traitor on the morrow as easily as a poor man make short work of
a cowardly wretch today.”
“I
will! I will!” The dwarf groveled at the young man’s feet, crawling forward to
kiss his boots. “Zvergrotz will keep his word this time! He promises!”
“Up
now!” Garin prodded the loathsome supplicant with the tip of the sword. “Make
haste, for I’m impatient to be done with you.”
END OF PART 1
Cool story,so far.
ReplyDeleteVery Good and I would not call it boring. I want part 2
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